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Before the Rain

before the rain of broken hearts,
before the clouds rolled in,
laughing in the demise they brought,
the tears they would cause,
the emotion suicide they would help create.

there where two
two hands to hold
two lips that kissed
two people
becoming one.

[(before the rain)]

all they want to do
is go back before the rain
or fast foward to the rainbow

but for now they are stuck

in.the.rain

Author notes

sorry so blah and the title prompt was
before the rain

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  • catalyst.
    November 18, 2008

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    all they want to do
    is go back before the rain
    or fast foward to the rainbow

    The imagery in this was outstanding

  • Time focus on Me
    November 16, 2008

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    Oustandin poem

    there where two
    two hands to hold
    two lips that kissed
    two people
    becoming one.

    [(before the rain)]

    all they want to do
    is go back before the rain
    or fast foward to the rainbow

    but for now they are stuck

    in.the.rain
    sis i loved it n enjoyed reading it. I can relate to this poem. U did a beautiful job sis with this poem. Very outstanding poem n wel written. Keep da ink flowing bc its amazin.

  • catalyst.
    November 16, 2008
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    your title is:
    Before Partly Cloudy