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Cute Little One

The birth of a baby
is most precious time
gives great joy in a family
some stress and readjustment
those sleepless nights
spending time to that cute little one
Parents will have much to give
love and lots of cuddle
family is restructured
in a comfortable way
as we watch that baby grows
the first smile , and crawl
as they learned to walk
their great achievements
gives us comfort

A contest entry

luke's so cute

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  • JustFallingApart
    November 17, 2008

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    I like it, the typing is a little bright for my eyes but I like this colors. This was overall a good poem. Thank you for entering, and hope all is well.