Someone saved my life tonight sugar bear
They've been here with me all night long sugar bear
They care enough to say I love you
They rescued me from all I would do
No more drinking no more tears
No more drowning sorrows in my bears
They talked to me all night long
Said that they would right all my wrongs
Someone saved my life tonight sugar-bear
Someone at last someone who cares
All alone no loner am I
Do you know the real reason why
Someone saved my life tonight sugar-bear
Gave their time and they did repair
My broken hearted memories ,Gone again with new hope
Never have to hang that rope cause
Someone saved my life tonight sugar bear.
A contest entry
- ". . .and it's one more beer, and I don't hear you anymore. . . .we've all gone crazy lately. . ." by JinSays.
1694 points, ended November 25, 2008, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this make you feel .
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, and I wish you all the best.
Love,
jin
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Liked it
I like this, I love stuffed animals. I liked
the line "No more drowning sorrows in my bears"
Sometimes I talk to my stuffed Penguin ,or Teddy Bear. Other people might not understand but I don't care
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Lovely Write
This was a pleasure to read this morning. Nice rhyming and imagery too. Take care. Sandy
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I loved the rhyming in this
It is so hard to write good rhyming poetry for me because I always end up forcing it. But this wasn;t forced at all which takes lots of talent.
Great Write
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