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It'd be nice to tell you.

Just a simple note.
Just simple words.
To explain an emotion,
That isn't exactly simple.

To the girl of my dreams,
I'd like to tell you
About the way you make me feel,
But I'm afraid I can't put it down in words,
It's too strong, too intense
To put it down,
Pen to paper,
Finger tips to the click of keys.

I'd really like you to know,
About how I want to hold you,
Kiss you
And cuddle you like it's going out of fashion.
Just to feel you,
Flesh to flesh,
Lips to lips...

And did I ever mention
You're the electricity running through my veins,
You're the life pulsating through me,
You're the love in my heart
And the adrenaline rushing around my body.

So, to the girl of my dreams,
Ti amo.

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Sarah, my little angello. I love you.

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  • alexandra.
    November 17, 2008
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    Emily.


    ...you write such beautiful words...




    loveyou.
    xxx.