I don't know how to show you
that I'm falling
Falling quick and fast.
Even though I know
the rumors and convictions
of the past.
You think I'm not interested
in you and everything you are,
We fit like a jigsaw,
but hopes and expectations
seem so very far.
There is a fire deep within
the pair of us.
Week's and month's may pass
you can depend on my trust.
Trust is something given,
also something to earn.
You have it now and forever,
just don't let me burn.
We are so very similar,
but also very different.
The look that's in your eye's
all seems so familiar.
I feel so safe and small
when you hold me so close,
I just can't stop the fall!
We fit like a jigsaw
in every single way,
you know exactly what to do,
I don't ever have to say.
Your like another piece of me,
a piece I can't keep safe.
But when we are together
we are safe here in this place.
One day we will be brave and face the storm,
face the thunder of disapproval,
Nothing can stop this,
the way you make me fall.
Author notes
this is about my lovely secret, he is very special to me, but people wont be happy, so until we are brave this is how its got to be, this is for you my gorgoeus ginger xXx
A contest entry
- What Are You Feeling? by Simone Brooklyn.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Exit Strategy by vampedvixen.
1200 points, ended November 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest! I haven't had a chance to reply to any of the poems until now. I loved this piece. It really reminds me of the special person in my own life that I can't be with. Bravo on getting the prompt just right
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"fire deep Misspelled within"
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Weeee!
You sound like its a roller coaster. How much is he giving to this. Interesting style.
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This is neat - just one thing! Did you mean "confictions" or "convictions" ? Might wanna fix that typo! I like how you weaved your theme through your beginning and ending. Youve got alot of strong emotions in here too. Keep it up! Good luck in the contest!
~nOva
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