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forgotten

and here I am
being eaten by darkness
surrounded and suddenly I feel like the air
no one can see me, no one can hear me, I'm nothing

the times have changed,
I can't pretend to be someone any longer
ending life would be as lifeless as I am already
happiness isn't meant to be mine anymore,

cause back then I thought I was someone
I thought people loved me, wanted me to live
now I feel forgotten, wasting space every single day
and I don't want to be with you, I want to be the darkness

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  • broken-angel
    January 2
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    wow you can feel the emotion in this, very powerful, great write hun, keep it up xxx


  • xXdeadXinsideXx
    November 19, 2008
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    Short poem but has a strong emotion it sets. I loved it and keep up the good work.


  • Unforgiveable
    November 17, 2008
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    short but not meaningless

    undead words were written here!