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Loves Soft Blanket

 

Blanket

Of fresh white snow.

Lights twinkling as bright stars,

angel takes her place on the tree.

Small smiles string the garland of popcorn.

Christmas music fills the warm home.

Holly wreath on the door,

here loves a soft

blanket.

 

 

 

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Words used: Snow, tree, wreath, lights, star, angel, garland.

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  • Fantastic write and with our recent snowfall it seems like a nice warm idea to have a soft warm blanket to wrap up in. Laughing


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Oh, this is beautiful...So glad I came by to read today..It puts one in the Christmas mood too..Your imagery, the picture and your form all encapsulates a mood, a time frozen in time that lasts forever in the treasury of our memories...Great dear one!


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Very lovely from the word go Well done and good luck in the contest

  • carole21
    November 21, 2008
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    nice write for the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!


  • arafura gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    Very cute and Christmassy! What is all that white stuff on the ground?

  • haley27 gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    This is goregeous

    This is a goregeous poem. I love winter when my kids fun sledding. Your lines were perfect in form. Thank you for coming to my contest. Haley27

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