starting of a journey
every one has a destiny to find,
looking in your eyes I have found mine.
gazing at the stars in a dark cold night
you brighten my dark skies
and fill my days and nights
with stars, hopes, and cascading dreams.
you always show how much you care
with the loving things you do
from a tender kiss to a warm embrace
and whisper "I love you"
I would give up everything
to spend forever with you
and in my heart I know what I feel is true
much joy and happiness you've brought me
always and Forever,
I'll love you till the end
I can never ask for more because
my life has been complete since
I found you!
A contest entry
- "Prewrites " + Plus by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended November 20, 2008, 66 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an excellent written piece.
I see nothing I would change.
A beautiful journey with a beautiful end.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
ED.
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This is pretty good although I would check the spelling.Good luck in the contest.You spoke from the heart,you have shown great love and admiration to this person and they would be proud to read this and know how you feel.You should be very proud of this.
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