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the joker

You have me under your nails, wishing to rid yourself of me.
Do you understand what I am? Do you even care?
The heat from your lust chars my eye and scars my soul.
Your charm is addictive, yet destructive.
You set your sights on me, a fool for the slaughter.
And now I have worn you weary in this game.
I have my sights on you, to remove the world of you.
You explode with sensual might, sadistic knight in arms.
My breath quakes at the thought of your sin’s.
A shot in the dark I take when daydreaming in vain,
You make my fantasy’s contort into nightmares.
I refuse to be your pawn, trapped inside my own thoughts.
I tremble in your presence, you intoxicate me without effort.
You use my own tricks, and throw them in my face.
Your glance is melodic, evil and seductive.
Your heart is a black hole, trying to suck me in.
I’m want to break free, and watch your trance fade to black,
love and war are both art forms, and you relish in your talents.
The truth is, I’m just like you, and that’s why it hurts…

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