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Look Closlely

If
I look
Hard enough
If i try to find
the one true person
inside someone, I will
see that not one being in
the universe is so simple, that
they can express
themselves
with one
thing

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  • snakebites
    December 21, 2008

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    this is true about all people;
    nobody is simple in the universe.

    for we live in such a complex world.


  • SeptemberFaith
    November 16, 2008
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Hi DeLusional,

    I think that you are right.. no one person can express themselves in only one fashion. I think that this could benefit from a little more structure. I see that it looks a little like an arrow, but the lines cut off at odd points and make it a little hard to follow.

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