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I'll Cry for You

 

 

Put on that brave face
let them think you're okay
and please don't quiver
you'll lose the facade

I can see your misery
I can only watch, fascinated
I can cry and be your escape
I will be by your side in times of need

Warm liquid consoles a cold presence
for now my tears can not be held back
No worries, I'm doing this for you
that way your heart doesn't spill over

You should always know one thing
I will ALWAYS be your shoulder
to cry upon in your sorrows

 

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Trapped by manips-of-artist2

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I just heard some rather uneasy news about a friends mother. (I'm not sure if it is true yet) When I saw the picture it made me think of all the times when friends need that one shoulder.

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  • Short but cute
    November 19, 2008
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    I love this! Great right!


  • kiwigirljacks
    November 17, 2008

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    We all need a shoulder in times of need, yes!! Someone who we don't have to pretend everything is ok with. Excellent take.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    wow...beautifully written poem. I like your play with the text in this piece. Good luck

  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    So many put on a brave face, when friends are there to help. Beautifully portrayed here, wonderful write. Thanks for entering and good luck

  • XxAbby-Jay-CrunkxX
    November 16, 2008

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    oh wow. im stunned at this poem its amazing. it really got me thinking. its a lovely write well done

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