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Its you birthday

Its your birthday
go and celibrate
dont sit around and lay
go on a date

Have fun
be wacky and wild
your lifes no were near done
but your no longer a child

So go on and get going
live life and enjoy
make sure all your happy feeling are showing
go on have fun, maybe youl find a special boy!

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