Lifeless body,
Soaken through,
Battered and Beaten,
Blood stained too,
Fallen Angel,
Left to die,
Broken wings,
Not destined to fly,
Sullen mind,
Dripping wrist,
Rusted razor,
On death's list,
Sad little girl,
Abused and Bi,
Bullied to suicide,
Life was a lie,
Was an emo,
Until she died,
Now only at heart,
Emotions tied,
Conflicted thoughts,
Why was it her,
Hurt for what she was,
All was a blur,
Only a style,
Yet a sentence to death,
"Why was I born",
Words of her last dying breath,
Never wanted to live,
For life was hell,
Unwilling to leave,
Her secluded shell,
Hiding from the world,
Never understood,
Was sexually abused,
Lost childhood,
Now dead and buried,
She doesn't have to care,
Repressed memories,
Never to share...
Author notes
An abused, bi-sexual, emo was bullied to the point of suicide, and left to wonder in hell why she was bullied because of who she was, and why the world is so cruel...
A contest entry
- Emo's endless tears by xXtired-of-cryingXx.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like it. I mean, this is a poem that is easy to relate to; even though it's about someone his is bisexual and emo being abused, anyone who has felt abuse can relate to it's words. Very nice, indeed!
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I'm bi and emo AND abused. This would have fit me to a tee last month.
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AMAZING
this is a fantastic poem!
the emotional depth is amazing
and the beat to the text is pretty good too!
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Excellent
This was great! It flows so well and the imagery is fine-tuned.
I don't think anything needs to be changed.
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I love this so much...
I loved it because I know how that feels. I know what its like to be bullied as I was bullied for 11 years of my life.
I think it was the personal connection I had with it that made it so good.
Don't change it. I really like it =]
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