We got the cutest pair of kitties just a short while back;
their names are Treegold and Beegold and they never attack.
The boy is named Treegold, he's a curious cat
but he's really very cautious; yes, we think he's laid back
whereas his sister, little Beegold is an active thing -
she'll be jumping over canyons trying to catch that ring.
Treegold likes to cuddle, he wants lovin' and treats;
though his sister's name means honey, she's not half as sweet
but the only time they quarrel is if one's got food
or a little bitty something that smells yummy n' good.
Hey little Treegold what is with all the flight?
Little bitty kitty's just relaxed, and a delight.
Hey little Beegold, come and chew on a bite
of these little Amber kitty treats that taste so righty, right.
Oh, these twins are home alone all day and never are bad.
No, they never crap on covers like that Stripers we had.
They just hang out together in good company
and the only time we worry's when the landlady
comes to check out the apartment, run her big vacuum.
Kitties freak and so she locks 'em in the dark bathroom!
Hey little kitties, what is with all the fuss?
These German housekeepers don't like any speck or muss.
Hey little kitties, better run and hide, don't play--
The German housekeeper's going to clean the rugs today.
Author notes
to the tune of Corey's Mean Kitty Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qit3ALTelOo
A contest entry
- Be Inspired By My Playlist! by Kari.
1500 points, ended November 17, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a delight to read and I can clearly see how much they mean to you!!! Good luck in the contest dear.
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Oh, well done!
Your kitties sound delightful - mine hates the vacuum too! 
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This is really good. The beat is very well done. I liked what you named the kitties. Very unique names!
Thanks for entering my contest and giving me a laugh 
Kari
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I like it.
It reads very smoothly with a good story line--you make it look so easy.
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Ah wonderful ea, this was a great fun write.
I see there are a few 'Sparta' fans on the site. lol.
I loved reading about your own cats.
Ann
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They are like kids. You never know what you are going to get.
This is such a wonderful write but then I'm a sucker for anything cat related. Maybe they don't even intend to but they bring such joy.
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Aww this is a fun little piece you've written. I must admit though I wanted to see a picture posted with it.
Try giving Treegold catnip and see if she flies to the moon.
Paul
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