Golden God, my beautiful one
your face commands my trembling
on hands and knees
I crawl into your gaze,
my lips falling heavy
into the palm of your waiting hand.
I pluck stars from Love's twilight
and string them along my shivering veins
to adorn your liquid eyes,
Adonis' own ocean-blue.
You blind me, exquisite one,
with your artful touch,
your laugh the silvery bells of a storm
as your long fingers
slowly take apart
my spine.
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You know this is for you. :]
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sounds kinda worshipful... my favorite part:
I pluck stars from Love's twilight
and string them along my shivering veins
to adorn your liquid eyes,
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My God! I am stunned silent!
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sweet words to your beloved
i totally understand the feels you have for your golden god , i feel the same way to my One and Only . if i could string a verse to let you know how beautiful and safe this piece made me feel thank you for sharing
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I crawl into your gaze,
You give great detail and depth with your wording..truly enjoyed reading this! I'm left with many images that actually make me think a bit about what lines this poem. Enjoyed this!
~Kimberly~
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i like how this flowed.
a touch of feeling that i can't quite put my fingure on....
forgiveness, maybe?
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No, not forgiveness. Moreso the worship that comes with an all-encompassing love. :] Brandon does that to me.
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kinda figured that lol. there's just also a feeling of knowing that you have that love. but not sure if its real. like your scared to actually reach out and close your eyes.. and know that its not just a dream.
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Yes, sometimes I am afraid to close my eyes at night.
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I love the sensuality in this piece, great imagery using lips and hands. I also like the usage of the metaphor of Gods, it emphasizes the strength of the emotion in the piece.
Good write.
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Thank you very much.
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