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Three Little Words

Those three little words

I long to hear

From the one

I love so dear

 

Three little words

She will not say

That mean so much

I need and pray

 

The words she won't

Let me say

I love you

Each and every day

 

Our hearts are one

And will never part

Even though we are

Worlds apart

 

Please just know

I think of you

And one day we'll say

I love you

Author notes

By ~ Maxboy
Background ~ LadyDementia
Those Three Little Words ~ "I Love You"
Contest ~ Option ~ Words, I'll never hear.


Letitia Michelle Contest "I think I know" Option~Quote~And what if I said I love you?


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Comments

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  • Antebellum
    March 16
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    Its sweet.
    goodluck


  • Rashida
    March 5
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    Excellent write, I enjoyed it. The flow was most excellent, brava!


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 5
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • doolie gold member
    December 24, 2008

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    What a great poem.

    You touched my heart with this poem. I feel that it was written just for me. Let me say the words you so much want to hear. I Love You.


    • Maxboy gold member
      December 24, 2008

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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment sweetheart, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      I Love You Too


  • Meroza
    November 29, 2008

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    *shakes my head* you'r a strange one...


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank you sweet one for the comment, when did I ever tell you, I wasn't strange? hahaha



  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    It's amazing how three little words can mean so much and change our lifes forever...this is so sweet and loving...yet hold a touch of sorrow as one haert waits for another...
    Best to you, dear sir...
    mystic


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much Kim, I am very pleased you liked my poem. You always have such loving words, except when you got to the dear sir part, we are way past such formality love.



  • Riftkin gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Those wonderful and tender three little words, that one longs to hear and that are so hard to say.

    Joann


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 20, 2008
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      Thank you sweetie for your wonderful comment and applause. I am very pleased you enjoyed my poem.

      Thanks Joann


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Aww this is so sweet! Those 3 little words can be so hard to say sometimes, and they can be life changing when you do A beautifully penned piece, congrats on the HM hunni


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you sweetie for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am very happy you enjoyed it.


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Thank you for your most heartfelt entry , I can relate very well to this write, Josie


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and wonderful comment. I am most thankful you enjoyed my poem.

      Thank you Josie
      Don


  • Ziola
    November 16, 2008
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    very beautiful.


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you for the applause and wonderful comment, I am very happy you liked it.

      Thank You


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    November 16, 2008

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    this was a very nice soothing poem here you really did a great excellent job with this contest piece here good luck to you in the contest


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.

      Thanks Again


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    This is so sweet and I love it! The background is great


    • Maxboy gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the applause and wonderful comment, I am happy you liked it.


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