When you left me
I faded into blue rivulets of remnants
of a love that once surrounded me
Cushioned, caressing me
but only now absorbing me
Falling helplessly into the blue reflections
as my old memories of a love you echoed to me endlessly
Dying and drowning into the one wasteland of lost loves
becoming only one drop in your memory
Disposed of, drifting, disappearing subtly sinking
I faded totally into silent depths
blending into ripples once subsiding slowly
I became not even a lost whisper
in your solitary relentlessly cruel heart
Author notes
Crediting Artist....Trapped by manips-of-artist2
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 25 by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So sad! Felt the drowning in desolation here! Great take on the pic
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great use of alliteration! most over do it.but you did a fine job...really worked to give you a flawless flow in your piece. great take on the prompt
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A very powerful piece, such sad imagery. Great take on the picture, thanks for entering and good luck
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