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Her tired voice

 

Hearing my mothers tired voice,

Trying to put the pieces together,

To try and be there for us all.

 

My guilt ace with shame,

For I will be taking mum away,

And she will be by my very side.

 

My one sister need her to be here,

At home to support her trough,

Her new class year at the universe.

 

My brother need her to be with him,

For he hates to be all alone,

Even though he is a big boy now.

 

And me I wish she didn't come,

To spend the week with only me,

For I would rather be left alone.

 

But so it is, she priorities me,

And my brother gets mad,

For he dosen't understand.

 

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  • Maxboy gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    I feel your pain here, you have expressed it very well. I do believe you take to much guilt for her actions you don't have any control of.

    Well Done


  • Hell In Harmony
    November 18, 2008
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    interesting take
    I can feel the emotion


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 16, 2008

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    all this talent in one pen, it is amazing, and humbling, i love it , keep it flowing and good luck in the contest