Amber petals unfurled in soul,
each blown by words
axing love.
Few intrepid velvets
waver not,
for true feelings
decline to annihilate,
brewing passion
in altercating heart.
Author notes
1-picture above ^^^^ credit: he_loves_me_by yabbles
A contest entry
- WRITE! by luna-midnight.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow....very powerful. loving it
thanks for entering ad good luck
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A unique take on the prompt and very beautiful as well! Thank you for entering! Good luck to you!
Love,
Alyzeh
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Thanks a lot for your wishes dear!
Have a nice day!
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oh i forgot your applause =D
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=0 wow, almost to deep for interpritation and i felt that it could be taken in so many different ways. beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your applause and lovely comment..I am glad you found it intriguing
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Very beautiful.
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Thanks a lot dear..
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What a cool take on that picture! You went beyond it here and penned something deep!
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Thanks a lot for your lovely words!
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Wonderful..
This piece is truly stunning, I adore your take on the picture!
Good luck in the contest
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Thanks a lot for your wishes and comment dear!
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I like this you did a great job with the picture good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well
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Thanks a lot sis...
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