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Im sorry

As happy thoughts roam my mind
I still think of you
All our memories together
All the pain we've suffered
All the pain you've inflicted upon me
All the trouble I've caused you
Just being there
Loving you
Must have been a big mistake
Im sorry I ever loved you
Im sorry you meant the world to me
As I lay thinking of you
A small piece of my heart shatters to the floor
You were the only one who ever loved me
For me
Guess I took it too far


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  • Judith Chandler
    November 16, 2008

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    I'm sorry it didn't work out. I gather there was some love on both sides but there isn't any longer.


    • xEndlessDreamsx
      November 16, 2008
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      its okay. there was love,deep deep love. and ur right. not any longer. jus recently got over it. =]