I am not euphoric now
but not depressed.
I have thoughts to think
and I could worry
but I am determined
to let things
develop
as they will.
No need to swear,
no urge - less than usual.
Sometimes I need to cry
but not for long.
I realize that,
no matter what happens,
I will remain interested
in what's around me.
A contest entry
- What Are You Feeling? by Simone Brooklyn.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what's your opinion of this?
Comments
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this is really good, it feels like a piece about healing, but not being fully healed, it's something that i very much can relate to, this is really amazing and i can certainly relate to it, great work
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You have a good grip on things, it seems, prepared for your surgery; you sound resolved to enter into it with a good attitude. Wishing you a speedy recovery.
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You have a good way of expressing emotions, thoughts and feelings..Very good write here and we all feel like this many times...every moment has its mood!
Good luck in the contest!
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