Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

A New Day

in the stillness
with sunrise closing in
life waits

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Titus gold member
    November 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Your poem speaks about us, waiting for this kind of scenario of usual routine. I can imagine us doing it, but very much doubt if nature would.


  • Lee Tai Wah
    November 20, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Hi davidwright

    Excellent write. Simple and direct. Good luck in the contest.


  • rbruce gold member
    November 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This poem is deceptively simple looking but implies volumes. many times I have sat quietly and watched the sun rise and the life around me is activated.

  • michaeline
    November 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Pretty good Haiku.simply stated and true.Every day is a new day and life awaits.Great job.Good luck in the contest.