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Oh Sweet Bride

Oh sweet bride dry your
eyes,you cried yourself a river
how deep is the salt water tears.

Now you hold the key
to my heart,the key
to your kingdom.

Ask anything of me
if it is in my power
I shall give it to you.

You are my happiness
you are the sun shine of my day
surely I would die for you.

Just to see you happy
and laugh and smile.
Are truly priceless gifts.

I am your white knight
I will do battle with any man
I fight and die for my kingdom
your happiness.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    A very uplifting take on the picture! Lovely


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    aw. this is special. she is not alone, there is someone that cares for her...like your take on the prompt
    Good luck


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Ah the white knight, something most girls dream for. A great take, wonderful emotions, thanks for entering and good luck


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    This is so sweet! I enjoyed this from you


  • crimsondew
    November 16, 2008
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    This is a very sweet poem like its title..
    All the best!

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