The key

She has it all, though she's dazed and confused.
she wonders what she has to lose.
She has the key to his heart, But it just wont open,
But how long will it be until her heart gets broken?

She wants more comfort than where she sits,
Under a waterfall with her heart in bits.

But until she knows how to use this key,

She'll have to use the same road and let it bleed.

And until then her feelings remain,

Under a waterfall drowning in pain.

A contest entry

Pretty Picture Prompt # 25 by kiwigirljacks. 700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Hope you liked xox

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XxScreamoxX
November 20, 2008
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OMG I Love This Poem
Its So Good
- Nardiarrrg
  November 21, 2008
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  Thank you... I'm glad you did
kiwigirljacks
November 17, 2008

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We all have to learn to use that key to our hearts to the best effect don't we! Nicely done,.
Catie Sheeran
November 17, 2008

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I like the last line..."under a waterfall drowning in pain" good luck
LadyDementia
November 17, 2008

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I like this, the rhyme has a good beat to it when reading. I did stumble a little with flow but over all this is a great little poem. Thanks for entering and good luck
Talitha777
November 16, 2008

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i was going to enter this contest, but until i saw this poem i thought i had a chance, wow what a beautiful peice, so short and direct, just wonderful, u are very talented, well done xxxxxxx