Festooned regal prince
Parading with confidence,
A queen’s young suitor.
A contest entry
- Haiku v Haiku by Have left the stage.
2400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations on the Silver! This was amazing.
Much love
Ylova
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well done, you've reached the second round
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oh, wow, I liked this, and I have to think, if you had not mentioned the peacocj, whether I would have thought of one anyway. It was almost there in that thought.
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Beautiful write! Stunning how simple yet elegant!
You have mastered the haiku!
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This is cute. Peacocks are beautiful!
Peacock is the national bird of India.
Well-expressed.
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Accurate
An accurate description of the peacock in a haiku. Well Done !!
That's what the peacock does: parades with confidence. Brilliant write !!
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Aww.. what a fantastic Haiku! Such a great image you create MJ!
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Now this is one very fine haiku and the aha moment at the end was splendid Best to you in the contest
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hehe, this is like soooo nice haha, i like it alot. good luck in the contest and take care
Stephanie ♥
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ha this made me smile
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Poignant, Regal, Beautiful, as Always.
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Thank you dear.
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