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Betta Haiku 01: Nimbus

living silver seems
like a baby dragon
a crowntail betta.

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  • Titus gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    This reminds me of droplet of either dew or rain, drizzling affection upon a dragons tail, or an otherwise drooped branch. Very quaint,


  • Advocatus Diaboli
    November 18, 2008

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    huh this is cool dude I got a crown tail beta he is all white the only one ive ever seen had him almost a year now, great haiku abstract like a beta

    Lucian"

    • intoothandclaw
      November 19, 2008
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      If you go to bettysplendens.com there are some really gorgeous pictures of bettas, including some pure white crowntails. They're absolutely gorgeous, like ghost fish. I like the plakats, too.


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    thumbs up

    so cleanly done, excellent


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    November 16, 2008

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    very different creative and a thought massager i think you penned this quite interesting i like it god luck to you in the contest

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