My heart is full of empty spaces
Waiting to be filled
Always has been, always will
Or so I thought 'til you
Such strange things are happening
You came into the world
Swept me up and carried me
Now I'm gone for sure
Now there are no empty spaces
Waiting to be filled
Instead there's warmth and your sweet kiss
Your smile and your laugh
I never thought I'd be like this
Happy, here with you
But then again you're not like them
Or you'd walk by me too.
Author notes
Okay, so this one sucks. Sorry about that. It came out of thin air and now that I read it over, it describes my current situation somewhat nicely (although not all of it is accurate), so I have an odd sort of respect for it. Bleh. Well, I hope you guys like it. Let me know how it can be improved (it IS finished, so the one thing I ask is that you don't tell me to continue it, please.)
COMMENT!!!!!!!!
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Awwww! That was so... sweet! I was ready for it to be extremely depressing but it just turned and became something that makes you want to smile.
Great write sis!
-Dlvvanzor
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Hnnn...it seems a lot like a song to me ^_^. I don't really know what kind of advice I could give...your rhythm works, and its a really balanced composition. (I think youre just being hard on yourself...we are our own worst critics, after all)...I like it. It's very sweet. AGGHHHH...writers block is KILLING me right now..ahem. I blame all the schoolwork...
<3
Maria ^_^
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