Look Luke,
the world inside your world
is warm and tender,
You, on top
of everyone’s agenda!
Look,
until you come out and see
all of this wonder,
You, of all,
a gift from above, rendered!
Look,
while your cute little heart
beats like thunder,
You will see
as you’re born, all eyes glitter!
Look,
while your mommy makes
you a place in this world so wonderful,
and until,
you are ready with a soul,
Look while the world is waiting for you
to give all things beautiful
when you’re due!
Author notes
For Baby Luke
"Luke's so cute"
In a list
A contest entry
- Baby on the Way 2!!! by JustFallingApart.
400 points, ended December 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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niceeeeee
really beautiful..i love the rhtym...and the "LOOK....LUKE" nice touch
i enjoyed reading this i had a smile on the whole time ....good luck in the contest ....
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Oh this is so very wonderful! This is such a beautiful custume piece, thank you for writing this. It's a great entry for my contest, thanks for entering. Hope all is well
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Such a gorgeous write of love , hope and promise. I know we wish these thoughts for all newborns.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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awesome. a great and beautiful write for a child. when he grows and read this some day, im sure he will feel proud to know that his birth was wanted and smiled on. again, awesome write. much love and respect.
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This is very precious! This is poem full of good feelings and smiles. I wish you the vbest of luck.
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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This is great!great tribute to Luke.You should be very proud of this,it is beautiful.Good luck in the contest.
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thank you Michaeline, I am trying to divert my writing to more spiritual topics. I want to get more expert on such writes, i think it is very fulfilling!
Love and light,
Lencio
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