dangling
from my Christmas tree
a plastic butterfly
A contest entry
- 48 hours to Haiku by azure85.
900 points, ended November 21, 2008, 36 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Classic and contemporary--true to the nature of the form in all respects. iidesuyo!
Best,
El
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well written
as don said...solid write...and congrads on the silver...but in my house...and it's every year...it would read...
dangling
from my christmas tree
the cats tail
also another thing happen this year...
christmas lights
lost in the outage
a child’s smile
well done here poet...an again congrads on the silver...larry
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Thank you so much, dear poet!
Thank you for sharing your haiku.
Charishma
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Solid write... very visual........... congrats on the silver!
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Hey, thank you!!
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Dropped in to see how you were and found this wonderful piece. As wonderful as ever.
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O Thank you so much!!
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dangling
from my Christmas tree
a plastic butterfly
What a cool scene, with the beauty of the ornament in the midst of a winter holiday. Very nice haiku, thank you so much.
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Plastic butterfly, eh?
This gives me a lot to think about- perhaps you didn't mean for it to be like this, but this seems like a bit of a representational poem. One in which one simple thing has a lot of different connotations and represents a lot of other different things.
Luck in contest!
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