She drifts across eternity's skies
caressing troubled souls
crying in the darkness.
Ruler of the tides.
listening for
the call of distress,
her gentle cloak
gives clarity
to the obscure.
Fear is dissipated.
Author notes
15 - 35 words acceptable
A contest entry
- Preying Moon by misticmoonlite.
470 points, ended November 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awsome mum
great write on a beautiful pix
i loved the first stanza
good luck in the contest
xxx Judie xxx
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Excellent
What a great write as always. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Our night time angel... caressing troubled souls... a wonderful image amidst the soft flow of words... Beautifully done and best of luck.
Ken
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very lovely piece. I do like the way the words flowed and spoke, I thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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Excellent word choice, goodluck in the contest.
Charishma -
Such serenity fails me but if I were to find it, I wish it just like this. Beautiful hun, you always capture the perfect moment in time with pictures and words. No exception here. Best to you in the contest
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Good luck in this contest.I think that you did a great jobon this.You shose the perfect words I think.Very creative and differant then what I was expecting.The title was well thought out and you were easy to understand.My favorite lines would have to be the first two.Great job.
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