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A portrait in suit

In her silver jubilee year
some thing goes crazy in her heart and mind

Inundated in the floods of eulogies
she strives hard to revitalize her nerves

She knows the depth of winter chills
and the tenderness of springing leaves
and the true colours of the falling leaves
and hot weather strips of summer sun

None can freeze her hopes
and never she tastes the fatality of her desires

Alone and amidst the grateful grace
she acts in wonderful deeds to resonate in silent streams

Behold her, for her beauty in essence
and behave now in a decent and pious portrait in suit

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    I felt her strength in this! A very strong write for the picture!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Quite a strong piece you have penned, some wonderful imagery and emotions laced throughout. Very neat read, thanks for entering and good luck


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    "none can freeze her hopes" I really like that line the best ...great take on the prompt and good luck