In her silver jubilee year
some thing goes crazy in her heart and mind
Inundated in the floods of eulogies
she strives hard to revitalize her nerves
She knows the depth of winter chills
and the tenderness of springing leaves
and the true colours of the falling leaves
and hot weather strips of summer sun
None can freeze her hopes
and never she tastes the fatality of her desires
Alone and amidst the grateful grace
she acts in wonderful deeds to resonate in silent streams
Behold her, for her beauty in essence
and behave now in a decent and pious portrait in suit
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 25 by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I felt her strength in this! A very strong write for the picture!


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Quite a strong piece you have penned, some wonderful imagery and emotions laced throughout. Very neat read, thanks for entering and good luck
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"none can freeze her hopes" I really like that line the best ...great take on the prompt and good luck



