Around aqua streaming through misfiring memories,
stirring in sorrows to feel, how painful a heart,
suddenly everything vanished, even no explanation,
blurred within suffering moments of an obsessed love.
countless disillusionment biting in course of life.
to lose importance before gestures of love to find,
perhaps 'was deceived innumerable times, lost confidence,
but instead of escaping, going to stay behind what I long.
Not really repeating the words, 'you're love, I'm sigh',
in spite of love's humility eroding, disarming my soul,
cupid is the frivolous, mocking little, treading my way,
hidden in fleet to plant melancholy seeds of conscience
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt Picture
Trapped by manips-of-artist2
99 words
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 25 by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I agree a powerful piece, with good clear imagery. I like the little splashes of alliteration, especially in the first line. Awesome poem, thanks for entering and good luck
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A very strong write with imagery and metaphors that I can realte to!
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Please credit picture in your AN, thank you.
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Sorry for the error. NOw credited the artist.
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Thank you
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You have a lot of really good metaphors in this piece...I really liked it ~
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