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Wedded Semen's (( Live Video ))

Wedded Semen’s

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

Tranquility waits,

humming impatiently.

As I slip myself a mickey

to intoxicate the beginning night

of our making love diary.

As I begin to pen the trembling buttons,

that will reveal me in birth date suit form.

Yes, long thoughts stroll the night

and play the notes of how much my desire,

has prepared me for the hardworking sweat.

I will pour over the rose petals,

as I join my flesh to yours,

and let the deep breaths weep in no shame.

Of how much I enjoy us rolling on top of one another

giggling and laughing an old sixties love tale.

I kiss your eyes, as I undo your tie

and you gently pull down my straps,

and feed off my erected nipples.

As you and I are afraid,

that the love day of judgment,

may appear before us at any moment.

You furiously push me down sexually on my back

and force my legs open,

as I reach down and divide the rivers of thirst,

and feed you my love.

Baby, drink me until the end of time,

I want to nurture you through the struggle

of me wanting you, needing you,

But can this passion keep us safe

like the freedom of the North Star?

Will you remember all my promising emotions

where ever you are?

As our love making is an art unknown.

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

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Love making is an art...Unknown.
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  • Ms Sexy silver member
    November 26, 2008

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    What's funny is i remember reading this. I just got my computer and i listened to too. I just remember my mouth being opened to the floor.


  • ennovy silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Excellent Suave Erotica

    Wow weeee....lady of sultry heated desires you have came to life, and full view in this piece...you also have lovely poetic voice....love hearing you!
    Your talent is dynamic........novy


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    As usual you are choossing the magical words..and the warm emotions..and the great poetry out of it as well..wonderful piece..thanks for sahring..


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      no thank you for the oppurtunity you are a great contest giver Mr. Khattar I enjoyed doing this as a live video and penning it good luck judging


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 17, 2008

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    i don't know what to say here, but i know this is a beautiful poem that is only added by the sound of your voice, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • cre8tiv-writer
    November 17, 2008

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    No words can express the greatness of your diversity of erotic flavor!!! You are the BOSS, the BADDEST BITCH....teach me!!!!

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Felt it...

    The trembles...the tranquility...the ascension after kissing his eyelids...loved that tender touch...
    yes...love making is an art form...two bodies creating their own sensual sculpture in rhapsody...


  • onesugar gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    An outstanding write and video hon...where's your writers block gone??? This totally sizzles in sensual steamy love...a truly wonderful take on the prompt. Good luck hon
    ~sugar~


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Very sensual and sexy sweet lady, nice to be able to hear your voice along with it.

    Wonderful


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      November 16, 2008
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      thanks Maxboy I am shock you returned the favor I wasn't even expecting it glad to have you take care


  • faderman1959
    November 16, 2008

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    An excellent elixer of love, intimacy and passion! What I like the most is the honest desire for one another. The sharing and enjoying each others company and pleasure. One of your best of this genre I think!


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      November 16, 2008
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      fader dude thanks well this is the second piece of mine you like thanks for droppin in


      • faderman1959
        November 16, 2008
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        Your very welcome and the pleasure is all mine! You have a very passionate heart!


  • darell
    November 16, 2008

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    Oh yes!

    Wedded Semens is a journey into sensual
    ecstasy. The pleasures of two lovers
    ignited in matromonial bliss. I enjoyed
    how you painted such brilliant images of
    passion and love making. There was a added
    dimension that gave ernest to the indulgance
    of love. The mentioning of end times and
    time running out made it intensely important.
    Great job my dear. I love all the flavors
    of this sensual ceremony of love.

  • cherrysmile
    November 16, 2008

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    my god!!!!

    i love this you continue to amaze me i am in love with your poety. thank you for allowing me to read this


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    OOOoooowhew!!!

    DAMN! Another blazer! wow so many hot phrasings throughout this piece! my fav. lines though was :

    "I reach down and divide the rivers of thirst,

    and feed you my love.

    Baby, drink me until the end of time,

    I want to nurture you through the struggle

    of me wanting you, needing you,"..jeez..that just killed me!







    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      November 16, 2008
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      Thanks knuckle head you enjoy the essence of a woman unlike most fools you so sweet honey


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    Ooooooo!!!!!! Girl this is well you know Hee Hee!!!!! I love it hon

    I will pour over the rose petals,
    as I join my flesh to yours,
    and let the deep breaths weep in no shame.
    Of how much I enjoy us rolling on top of one another
    giggling and laughing an old sixties love tale.


  • mcfreeman
    November 16, 2008
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    Dripping jazz and jism

    a whole new kind of rhthym


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      November 16, 2008
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      My ego's trippin this suppose to be the red cat jazz of love side and my other things suppose to be mrs. lady enthralling but peeps don't read me much over here and yea it my fault but thanks anyway

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