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Have I not the right to lose what faith,

I had when all about me seemed so dark?

Although I see quite clearly, having doubt

can influence no longer, such belief.

 

Patience may intend what hoping will,

for seeing less than what we had first aught,

cannot this be suspicion, newly brought

when all about it seems to now fulfill.

 

The selfish role throws one alluring light,

upon the said affliction of lost cause

an act of gross depiction, not applause,

is ringing in those ears of yours tonight.

 

The spotlight of the soul is self control,

a moment to react, with prime effect

The shining deportation of its role

as everything you are that we reflect. 

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inspired by the quote:
Oh God ! you are a spotlight and I am the darkness...Unknown.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Humm..this makes the point here..and thought you have created here is very much creatively handeled as well..thanks ro sharing it..


  • Mary O gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    Very nice indeed. . .a well written piece, Good luck to you in the contest.
    ~Mary O


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    great..

    as goodness another outstanding piece of art.
    luck i'd offer except i doubt u need it!!


  • Onionducks
    November 16, 2008

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    Wow

    Amazing... easy flow, brilliant rhyme, olden style writing. I love it! You are very talented! Keep penning and Happy Skies!

  • michaeline
    November 16, 2008
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    You write increadibly well.The thought and effort you put into this shows all the way through this poem.You have a great talant for writing and good luck to you in this contest.I do not think that I would change anything and I think that you chose a good title.Glad that I got the chance to read this.

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