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Do Two 'Wrongs' Make A Right ?


Two men at the alter: he's black and I'm white
Gay and interracial - do two 'wrongs' make a right ?


Society picks out everything they can find
Any characteristic that they deem incorrect
Relationships, historical buildings and frogs
Is there anything these people won't dissect ?


I look down at the front rows, reserved for my family
I try to imagine the seats are filled
With my grandparents, cousins and other relatives
I'd picture them approving... but my mind's not that skilled

Because in my head I can clearly remember
The expressions of disgust, and then the mock smiles
The excuses they used to explain their absences -
Imaginary doctor appointments, holidays and court trials

I had always desired a partner who had
All those traits I myself do not possess
Emotional stability, strength and the rest
But now that I've found him I'm still under stress

Because wherever we go, to the movies, out to dinner
There are people who simply cannot help but point and stare
And as tight as he holds me and whispers not to worry,
The constant cold looks and bad talk are almost too much to bear

Why should any relationship in which two people are one
Be judged so unfairly by people who are 'above' ?
If we were all blind would our appearence even matter ?
Do races have different hearts ?   What colour is love ?

Two men at the alter: he's black and I'm white
Gay and interracial - do two 'wrongs' make a right ?

 

Author notes

"9. Write me a poem about how wrong it is to judge people...I dont care if its by race, gender, or the way they look....it is wrong and there is no excuse."

Partly inspired by:
-- Long Way To Go [ Gwen Stefani ] --

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  • Rose-Quartz
    July 15

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    A Fantastic Piece Of Writing

    This is a Fantastic Piece Of Writing. This is so sad and yet so full of truth. Why should it matter to anyone what colour or gender someone is. The real things that are valid in this life should be peoples humanity, character and understanding. We are all humans all brothers/sisters on this earth. A wonderfully written poem that brings home the pain that must be experienced in this situation. Thankyou for sharing this heart-felt piece with me. With all my very best wishes from Rose xxx


    • KyleBerg gold member
      July 15
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      Everything you've said is so very true.
      Thank you for this most lovely comment.

  • WOW, I haven't commented on any of your poems for a while now because I hadn't been on that much but you still impress me whenever I read something of yours. You're so original!! It almost gets frustrating ...Plus, I really truly agree with your perspective here but it's also true that a lot of people, especially the older generation, are still very closeminded and that's hard to change, even though it's not such a positive thing...I love this poem from top to bottom but I especially love the verse whereyou said 'What colour is love?'...That's amazing =]...Oh and last thing, you reaaaaaaally deserved the gold and silver!!

    • KyleBerg gold member
      July 3
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment.
      I agree that old perspectives are hard to change... but open minds are essential if we ever want to live in a world where all people are treated equally.
      Thanks x.

  • I agree with you, it is your life and your choice to why should other people be intrussive and then be disapproving of your choices.. Good work thanx for entering the contest. Round 2 be there..

    • KyleBerg gold member
      April 22
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      Awesome ^_^
      I've never entered a round of contests before, so thanks heaps for putting me through to round 2 =D
      and thank you for the comment, i agrees with you


  • faderman1959
    February 3

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    Very wise words here! Relevant on many situations, but the way you finished this poem is what really gives it the greatest impact. Great write!

    • KyleBerg gold member
      February 4
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      I'm glad you understood and liked it! It's great that you think my ending has the most impact; that's what I was attempting ^_^

      Thank you for the kind comment

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Oh...

    The red/black/white background/font may sublimilinaly fight BUT does not make for the easiest reading. Do two two " wrongs" make a right? IF they hurt no one but bring pleasure to two!! I f, if I am deemed /classified by anyone then let me say loud and proud that gay and or inter-racial love should be allowed!!!! What a fu**ed up world when society readily accepts two men dying as brothers-in-arms yet refuses to accept two men as lovers-in-arms with sweet charms, gay/black/white/red/yellow/mellow yellow/ all should be FREE to find their partner of choice and how very dare anyone, even me, claim to say who should be with who! Disliked the presentation, the captalization of a new line when it was not neccessararily a new line, the background makes it difificult to focus, but hombre upon hombre is AOK!!!

    • KyleBerg gold member
      December 20, 2008
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      I always try my best with presentation, but sometimes there are backgrounds that simply will not cooperate with any font colours. I don't believe that it is enough of a problem to go about changing it in this case, but thank you for your concern

      As for the capitalisation... I was taught that every time you start a new line, you must capitalise the first letter, whether it is the start of a new sentence or not. I appreciate that other people have different poetic customs, but that is one of mine and I shall not be changing it.

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the issues portrayed here; they are very insightful and speak much truth.

      I appreciate you taking the time to comment.

      • Yvette Champ gold member
        December 21, 2008
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        KyleBerg...

        Thankyou! Thankyou for your wonderful response to my babbling. I am gifting you points to promote your creativity and wish you a happy, healthy and harmonic new year!


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Bravo

    This is oneof the most powerful poems that I have ever read. I love every word and every line. We live in a cruel society where Discriminations and Stereotyping creates chaos and hate. This is wrong! There is only one race, which is the HUMAN RACE. Love is equal for everyone.
    Thank you for sharing this brilliant piece.
    Peace
    David

    • KyleBerg gold member
      December 15, 2008
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      I am honoured to receive such a wonderful comment
      And I must totally agree with you; love should be equal for everyone... if we all shared the same values as people like you do, perhaps society would not be a cruel place after all.
      Thanks for reading, and thanks for sharing your thoughts


  • Alyzeh
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow. A beautifully written poem. This is captivating and an eye opener for many. I read your comment below, I don't get why people who read this didn't drop in comments either? because this is praise worthy. All the very best to you in the contest! This one's going to pick up a shiny, easily.

    Good luck and keep penning, always.
    Best wishes
    Alyzeh

    • KyleBerg gold member
      December 12, 2008
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      Thanks for the praise!
      It's great that you think it's an eye-opener
      Thanks you for your very appreciated comment

  • Writing0Freedom
    November 28, 2008

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    wow This is amazing and so powerful! This is beautifully written and its disgusting that people can't just accept and be happy for people who love each other. Love is love no matter what colors, races, genders it comes in- love is beautiful and precious no matter what.


    • KyleBerg gold member
      November 29, 2008
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      It is indeed disgusting.
      Thanks for the kind and insightful words


  • SweetxxAndxxSporty
    November 27, 2008
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    absolutely beautiful some serious props to you


  • Rheea gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    You have written a poem hopefully that will open eyes and make people think. It is haunting and beautiful.


  • Symphony
    November 20, 2008

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    I'm confused; I remember reading this the other day, and thought that I commented on it, but obviously not!

    Now, well, I certainly wasn't expecting to get a poem about different coloured gays; if I'm being honest, I guess I thought [stupidly!] that for two men, colour wouldn't matter - because homosexuals receive so much bad attention from society anyway. But to read this, it has opened my eyes a little.

    What can I say that I haven't already; colour shouldn't matter. But it does. And with you, I don't know why. Wonderful write,t hanks for entering

    • KyleBerg gold member
      November 20, 2008
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      Symphony honestly... how dare you 'expect' anything in particular when it comes to me The only thing to expect is the unexpected

      You're totally right; colour... should mean nothing, really.
      Thank you for the comment


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Wow.

    I can not express properly in words how this makes me feel. Society can be cruel and just pathetic ... love is love as far as I'm concerned.

    Gender doesn't mean anything, and race ... there is only one race in this world, the human race - shame more people don't see that.

    & it is even a worse shame when families shun their own blood because of whom they love

    This is a powerful write and one of my favourites on AP; hope you don't mind me bookmarking

    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

    • KyleBerg gold member
      November 18, 2008

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      ! Bookmark away!!

      And I have a confession... I was very nervous about this poem.. because until your comment it had 6 views but no comments... so I was worried that people thought it was really bad

      Thanks for putting me at ease there.

      And you're right, the issues in it are terrible...
      We can only hope that society is improving as time passes...

      Thank you for the very high compliments and the wonderful comment

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