I love the way you say
You'll always be loyal, and never stray
I love the way your nose crinkles
Whenever you laugh, your eyes wrinkle
I love the way you gaze at me
And praise me, you're so crazy
It's desirable, how you kissed and cuddled
It makes me blush and my brain befuddled
I love the way you see into my soul
You're presence just makes me feel so whole
I love your sweet whispers, into my ear
Whenever you're around, I never have to fear
Even if time breaks us apart
And you no longer need my heart
I know you'll always be my first love
As sweet as sugar, as pure as a dove
So hold me tight now
And hold me right now
Let us make some memories true
I know I'll never forget you.
A contest entry
- Put Him On A Golden Pedestal by Frodofan.
525 points, ended November 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"Even if time breaks us apart
And you no longer need my heart
I know you'll always be my first love
As sweet as sugar, as pure as a dove
So hold me tight now
And hold me right now
Let us make some memories true
I know I'll never forget you."
How true-- our first love never dies completely. It's good to remember that we should always make the most of the moments we have right now.
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Hi Priya, sounds like you have yourself a fine man. Let your love shine for him.
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Very sweet. Looks like you covered everything. Thanks for entering.
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