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Princess in Pigtails

Mostly frail, she is a tender rose

eager to sprout and bloom

as she dances and sings for a mirror

in the confines of her room

 

romance and other things of the heart

fill her head with misty dreams

along with the frustrations of this life

that sometimes, elicits screams.

 

A tear soaked Teddy bear gives her comfort

he listens and never disagrees

offering her warm fuzzy ‘Teddy hugs'

and will even catch a sneeze.

 

She,  is a lonely princess who surveys

from the branches of her backyard tree

and with blue eyes fixed on peach sunset

she whispers, "Sweet Prince, come rescue me."

 

 

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Option #6-dedication to someone: luna-midnight

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  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing. Such a beautiful dedication to Stephaniee! She is such an amazing person. I love her. We all love our little princess. Hehehe. Good luck in the contest

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    I missed this one and it was for our daughter too

    You wrote a lovely dedication, words you can be proud of dear.

    Love Margaret


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    aww..this is lovely. but you know, i dont think princes exsist anymore..and if they do, they mistake me to be the one under their blade...*sigh*

    thanks daddy i love it


  • Gwenevere
    November 16, 2008
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    Beautiful.a lovely dedicatin.I am sure she will love this, Ros


  • Alyzeh
    November 16, 2008

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    Awwww...this is so adorable. A lovely dedication I must say. Stephanie is an amazing young lady. She will love this, I'm so sure of it.
    An excellent write, thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 16, 2008

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    "Goodness gracious, Great Balls of Fire!!!!"

    Loved this completly,
    Steph is a wonderful young lady and you summed it up splendidly with this dedication.

    Great job

    All the best to you

    Ken


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Aww this is such a lovely write for Steph.


  • Randomly Beautiful
    November 16, 2008
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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Haven't we all sat wishing for our prince/princess charming. This is so beautifully portrayed. I think luna will love this. Best to you in the contest

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