I drink it down
it's not enough-
one thing's true,
it fills me up.
I snort the line
and feel the burn-
I'm flying high,
my stomach churns.
I slam the dope
and feel the rush-
people say
that I'm a lush.
I cry because my
mind's not still
all this pain,
I'll never heal.
I'm an addict
I scream inside-
emotions run deep
I try to hide.
No matter what
I am put through
I cannot stop
cause I've lost you.
written by Haley Bennett
May 15th, 2007
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i can relate to this alot...a very powerful piece with alot of meaning
amazing...great job! -
please read this
Nobody and i mean nobody should ever make u feel this way. I know exactly what youre saying in this poem and it never brought back so maney memories of my passed when i used things that no body really recommended to others.....maybe i shud not be telling you this and maybe u need to hear it... im trying to get through to you because i know youre asking for a way out youre trying to reach others through youre poems and noone is listening to you.... im listening to you every time i read these jus PLEASE PLEASE dnt hurt youre self no morednt cause youreself heartache or loss -
so much emotion, but you need to explain the neding a bit
it makes sense, but its verry non-descriptive
i can see this person in the poem well
i love the poem -
wonderful
very good i like it it has so much emotions init its wonderful
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