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Hold you tight

When melancholic thoughts
Are scribbled on canvas clouds
And roses wither, turning grey

Neon lights in your heart flicker



When your world spins out of control
And comes crashing into smiles

Your tears start to boil with agony



As memories float away,
And the glitter in your eye fades

I’ll hold you tight, and protect you
From the harsh wind

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Beauty Of Silence

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  • spiritualangel
    December 3, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well done. Best of Luck.


  • LoveDeprived
    November 17, 2008

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    no words come into my mind to discribe how beautiful this is, maybe its just the way it is, undiscribably beautiful...


  • maralisa silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    a brilliant take on the promt your emotions are brilliant good luck inthe contest marailsa


  • hyper thing
    November 16, 2008
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    this poem is really good
    keep writing


  • hyper thing
    November 16, 2008
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    this is really good

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