Dear,
I dreamt of you last night.
I was lost somewhere in your eyes,
wondering how I was ever going to get home.
Then I realized that I was already there.
I was at home in the circle of your arms
with your heart beating against me
and your breath on my neck.
Then I woke up with a start
as I realized that I wasn't dreaming.
In a list
A contest entry
- Passing A Note To All Poets by Dalaney.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sigh. Oh, sooooo romantic.
I would love to find a note
like this, as would anyone.
Thank you for entering.
Love, Lane

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"I dreamt of you last night.
I was lost somewhere in your eyes,"
Oh, those lines just made me smile and feel all warm inside!
haha! So sweet, I really enjoyed it!
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nicely written.. great job..




