tonight i fight
with my heart
and try to start
what would be the end
to something that never began
tomorrow, i'll cry
because i love you
and you love having me around
but you don't love me
you love what void i fill
and i'm letting you use me
because i vaule happiness more than pain
and thats what you bring me
i take the good with the bad
but lately it's only been getting worse
yesterday, you kissed me
and it felt so right
sadly there's something i never thought of
that it wouldn't mean a thing to you
just everything to me
and kissing you back
is something i'd never do
if i didn't think
there was a chance
now theres a chance
a chance i miss read
everything you ever said
and every kiss that brushed my lips
to you, i am just another fling
but to me you were, no are much much more
A contest entry
- Im Here If You Need Someone That Cares by storiesuntold.
925 points, ended November 28, 2008, 28 entries
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this is so sad, it's different from the other entries but it's still just as powerful, great poem, best of luck in the contest
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I hear you
I dont know how old you are on this contest but if you are young this sounds like a great friendship and to keep the friendship let it not go any furthure than the kiss for if you arent sure of his intentions save yourself from this pain . Be friends and enjoy life and go and do things together but dont waste the time you have in the best part of your life wanting love right now for if it is to be love will come later .When you are young your minds arent completely finnished changing and that is why their is so much heart breaks and sad young people running around today they try so hard to make someone else love them and give themselves away thinking this will please them and they will stay .Thnk about it this way honey thewy are just learning and their minds are changing every day as well . So if they arent sure what they want and you feel this is all you want what about tomorrow what happens if the real mr or mrs right comes along and here you are tied down yes I say tied down for you will feel you have given yourself to this one person . Did you know you can love your friends and enjoy life and help one another without getting involved sexually . Never engage in this while still in school unless you want to feel like your wearing your underware on the outside of your clothes for young boys never stay with anything for long and believe me young boys do talk their not grown yet so please if you care for tghis boy or girl then be their best friend and enjoy life without all the stress and worries . I hope this will help you understand that when you are young the heart is just learning so go slow and wait for love when your mind is fully developed and can handle tyhe pain that often comes with it
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