Awaiting the day of the ancient birth
The last of the food will not be the end
The world crumbles as the opposition rises
Author notes
Hehe... have fun! Oh and feel free to message me if you want my interpretation.
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Monkeys are going to take over the world! Hey, I try
didn't want to copy off everyone else's answer 
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I think this poem represents predictions for the world ending, which I think might happen sooner than we think.
I like you poem VERY much. 
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i think you are right, melodies. that is about the world ending.
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i agree with the other comment, sounds apocalyptic ...
my differential diagnosis (i love House, lol) alternative energy...
the ancient birth, the rise of natural resources (wind, solar, etc.)
the last of the food (last of the oil... well, its food for our cars)
and of course the opposition to this would come from lobbyists and corporations etc. which would lead to civil unrest and the end of the world!!!
so...how close was I lol -
this reminded of the end times and the apocalypse. actually more specifically, it reminded of the anti-christ and how he is supposed to guide us through though times (no food, perhaps? even if food is a metaphor...) good job!
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oh, i see it now! it all fits! i guess i had an "anti" interpretation, huh?
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