twice a week i go and find one
but the seagulls crowd around and
a fiery furnace shakes its fist at me
Author notes
1989 is the year I was born.
A contest entry
- Three-line poems that sound great but mean absolutely nothing... by Melodies.
650 points, ended November 17, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"a fiery furnace shakes its fist at me" I really like that line...tho i have no clue what the poem means at all. I just really like that line.
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This poem seems to represent life's frustrations and the hot feelings we experience when things change and do not go our way. 
YAY for your smart poem!
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thank you!
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I believe that its saying everytime you find a good memory of your younger days, people around you criticize you, and you lose your thoughts
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hm, this is true, i don't know if that's what this means necessarily, but i love your interpretation.
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you are looking for something, the seagulls imply you are at the beach and the "fiery furnace" is a reference to the sun.
so you are at the beach searching for seashells, or trying to scope out sunbathers in their swimsuits. -
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well, i never saw it that way lol, but thanks for the comment!
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Wow, it's certain to mean nothing.
I'm quite confused. -
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thanks! lol.
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