Dancing in the wind are the fallen leaves
Wandering in the mere is my lone shadow
Everything in my eyes is upside down
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Interesting poem, a good choise of words, a nice lenght. Yeah, in all a good poem.
Good luck
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Thank you very much to you all!
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so the leaves are falling up! cool Im really bad at reading between the lines...lol...great write!
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Absolutely true! Nothing in life is nailed down solid and we sometimes realize that when things do not go our way. 
Fine writing!
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oooh I see, I just checked another dictionary and it says its a British idiom. My dictionary on my mac only had one definition hehe.
dictionary.com:
–noun
1. Chiefly British Dialect. a lake or pond.
2. Obsolete. any body of sea water.
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nice take on the prompt..
not to nitpick the poem, but in the second line, is "mere" the word you were going for? perhaps you meant mirror, but I'm not sure.
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First of all, thank you very much for your comment.
Well, the word "mere" is not used very often I think. It can be used as a noun which means an expanse of standing water. [ link:http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/mere[1] ]
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