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To my girl

I come before thee
On bended knee
Your wisdom my honour
Your strength my valour
Your need my desire
Your beuty unsurpassed by nature herself
Rest your weary loins upon my statcher
Raised in your glory
My confidant
My sprit
My soul
My lady

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by jogn Old school lust

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  • ChaingangAngel
    November 18, 2008
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    This write is quite short you should add more to this write
  • celadia
    November 16, 2008

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    This is an old school lust, I'm just a little younger than you and I can hardly remember these things, but you wrote a cute, funny poem.