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Tiffannie's Prayer

God, Please grant me the strength

To change the things

That I have convinced myself I couldn't change,

To banish the negative energy in my life,

And the wisdom to know what caused it in the first place.

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  • moonrays
    August 28, 2009
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    Nice Twist

    Nice Twist of the serenity prayer. Love this

  • Revwilliamfoos
    November 19, 2008
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    how wise this is it shall be my prayer as well
    love the rev papa


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 16, 2008

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    it is good to see you back my friend, no matter how long it is, your pen was missed, but i have to wonder why you wrote this. keep it flowing