As I lie here
With your body so near
Grasping each other tight
As we move into the night
We are a painted picture
A cocktail of desire, a mixture
Of all that is deemed sinful in the world
With love's beauty now unfurled
You painted love's portrait, oh what art
That makes you fill me as I part
Your kisses, they are the fire
That ignites me from this Maya
Our hands become lavished
In sweat, as we are ravished
Our eyes lock in gaze
Oh, how I crumble in your waves
My recesses filled
My consciousness killed
And now, here I go
I just slip away
Into this portrait we have made
Let us go;
Let us fade
A contest entry
- Love making ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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so poetically you have stresed the need of the love and its amazement is shared with this as well..love it..and thanks for sharing..
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this is a work of poetic art my friend, the images were alive and it was a great read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I love how it dark and sensual all in one
my favorite line has to be
"A cocktail of desire, a mixture"
this is really good : -
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Thanks so much
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