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an ode to cheddar

cheese please
I need my cheese
I beg thee do not tease
I ask upon my hands and knees
please
give me cheese

oh, cheddar devine
thy substance is mine
and thy flavor sublime
doth call to my mind
and my tastebuds are forever thine

Author notes

11-15-08
now see? i can write about anything! and if you were wondering, yes, i am insane. i think i might add more later... depends on if my "random" thought processes kick in again lol

Please tell me your honest opinion and let me know if you love cheese as much as i and whether this is an adequate tribute to it lol

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  • DreamMountain
    October 16
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    you don't eat a lot of cheese do you?


  • Dreaming-demon
    November 19, 2008
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    Lol you werent lying...nice...behold the power of cheese...great poem..


  • partridge
    November 16, 2008

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    As Dora the Explorer would say, !Delicioso!

    Oh my gosh. You renewed the adoration of cheese that I'd forgotten long ago in the abyss of time, thank you so much! I loveeee how you ended it x)