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One night stand

I met you at a bar.
I don't really remember your name.
Guess I'm the one to blame.
I winked and let you buy me a drink.
I should have offered sex.
You're wanting it and, I can feel your game.
To tell you the truth I'm feeling the same.
I'll play around and make you think,
and make you cum before you blink.
I'm a slut, don't get it confused,
I tell you I really like getting fucked,
even better when I'm abused.
Used like a sex slave.
I like being choked, slapped, scraped, pinched,
mmmm I want you to teach me to behave.
But I won't tell you that,
I'll play my part.
Hopefully I won't steal your heart.
Because that's not what I want,
I only want to taunt.
Your my mousey I'm the cat,
But I don't think you'd comprehend that.
So I'll behave and batt my eyes,
hoping that you want no ties.
So use me up,
there's not much left.
And throw me away like yesterday's news.
This will be the last night I see you.
This is the last night I want to.
So here's your chance,
drop your pants.
It's time to fuck.
Stick it in,
don't look back,
bend over baby
I'll lick your sack

Author notes

Um. I uh....I changed my mind about 5 times during this poem. At first I wanted it to be serious erotica, but evetually I got silly.

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  • alaskanamber
    November 16, 2008

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    I'm all for it

    Nice write. Not sure what the intention was with this line "I like being choked, slapped, sraped, pinched," not sure what the word is supposed to mean? I love the topic and it's right along the lines that I was looking for. Good job. Here's a gold star!!!!


  • Brown-Eyed-Wolf
    November 15, 2008

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    *************-_-

    Thanks . . . now I'm completely turned on . . . and right after I told that girl we were talking about (My "Bella") I love her . . . You're really testing my dilligence, u know =P

    great erotic poem . . .