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the kiss

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your kiss resonates
all trace of reason leaves me
longing now for more

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  • Bruce silver member
    January 16

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    I really like this one! The third line forms a gentle counterpoint to the first two, but is quite distinct in sound value. Very impressive.


  • Sokarjo
    December 15, 2008

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    Short, but powerful in its own right. very well done. Not quite what I was looking for, but still well written. Thanks for entering! :-)


  • azure85 gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    your kiss resonates
    all trace of reason leaves me
    longing now for more

    A very romantic haiku, with a lovely L3 that entrances the reader. Thank you so much.


  • sunoir
    November 16, 2008

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    Such a succinct form for strong emotions and you did them justice. Whats with this every time I read one of your poems lately you get me thinking men! *LOL*...kudos


  • Celtic Legend
    November 16, 2008
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    great haiku!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    mmmm...

    this is even nicer!

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